Ode to Sweat
Today's prompt was to create a kind of deck of cards with words, and to use those words to come up with a poem. I put my list of words into a random chooser online because I was too lazy to print and cut my cards, and it came up with "Dear" and "Sweat" as my words. It also chose strawberry and murmur, which might be interesting to get into this poem about sweat as well. Alas, here's my attempt. I like to sweat. I'm weird like that. It makes me feel alive. I feel like as women, we're taught to fear our scent. But sweat carries that, and it's empowering. At any rate, here's my ode to sweat.
Ode to Sweat
Dear
sweat, I love the way you wash me clean—
Pooling at
my back’s smell,
Misting in
the crevices of me,
You remind
me that this flesh
Is nothing
like a delicate flower,
Stationary,
carried by the wind,
But this:
muscle, bone, and grit
That needs
nothing but your river
Running through
it to keep on.
Dear
sweat, you are the miracle
Of a
cool breeze bringing me to life
Again while
in the midst of a summer run,
The pavement
pounding at my feet.
You are the
coolness on a summer night
When I
wake and you’re surrounding me
Again with
what the body knows it needs.
When
afraid, you burst forth from my pores
On cue
to take the heat away. Oh sweat,
Your smell
is everything I am,
Even though
I try to mask you
With the
soft scents of baby powder,
Springtime
flowers, anything
But you.
But you break through.
Sweat, you
keep me company
on my
long runs through the forests
of
suburbia, on the hunt for the beast
within
myself, the one whose thirst you quench.
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